literature

Miss You Already

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Tomorrow you’ll be gone with the last kiss from my lips lingering on yours.
Fight it.
Fail it.
Take flight.
Nail it.
Fix it.
Cry for it.
Leave it.
Return.
Crave it.
Erase it.
Feel the burn.
Touch it.
Hold it.
Wish I’d learn.
Watch you gather speed on your wings and rocket away from nothingness.
Denial.
Anger.
Violence.
Depression.
Acceptance.
Accentuate it so I can see where I am on the scale of missing you.
I’d apologise;
With tears in my eyes.
We’d smile;
We’d kiss;
We’d watch the world go by.
But you’re leaving me;
You cannot stay;
You wouldn’t want to;
If you knew I was this way.
If I miss you come back and slap me hard and leave again because I'm not allowed to love.
Yesterday you were not on my horizon;
Today you irk the strings of my contentment;
Tomorrow you’ll be gone
I left the final line without a full stop, i want it to be an open end to (what must be confusing for you), i want this to be hope but with an alternate twist. thinking now that i shouldn't do that because if you don't read this you won't get it... well, you won't get the full stop part. i expect no one to understand this, i'm experimenting, trying to be different i suppose.
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ForceOfReason's avatar
this is absolutely exceptional.

if i get time, i'll do a critique.